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A short (sorry, belated) critique from 
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This is really nicely done! I especially like how you've done the foreshortening! The lineart is really good, and I love the pose!
There are, however, a few things you could improve. First of all, the drawing gets very close to the paper at times. This creates a cramped effect. A good thumb rule is that you should be able to frame a drawing without cutting off anything.
I also notice that you haven't erased the original pencil sketch. I would recommend you to do this, as it else looks a bit unfinished and maybe even sloppy. Just the lineart looks cleaner.
But all in all, this is really well done! Continue like this!
:This is really nicely done! I especially like how you've done the foreshortening! The lineart is really good, and I love the pose!
There are, however, a few things you could improve. First of all, the drawing gets very close to the paper at times. This creates a cramped effect. A good thumb rule is that you should be able to frame a drawing without cutting off anything.
I also notice that you haven't erased the original pencil sketch. I would recommend you to do this, as it else looks a bit unfinished and maybe even sloppy. Just the lineart looks cleaner.
But all in all, this is really well done! Continue like this!